Intriguing
Fix the sound, it's terrible. Other than that, you have some decent Flash skills.
Intriguing
Fix the sound, it's terrible. Other than that, you have some decent Flash skills.
Once again...
This is the update? It still has the shitty graphics, idiotic sound scheme, and lack of worthwhile plot or humor. Give up on this.
You're the only one that gave this a 0...
Truly excellent
The sound was clear and absolutely stellar. I think dialogue is unnecessary and absolutely detrimental, so I'm glad you left it out. The graphics were good. Not the best, but still better than anything I've seen all day. I was quite impressed with this, and I look forward to your future works. I would look into some smoother motion techniques for your water and spinning, but other than that it was really quite good.
Um....
...only one rope was holding that sign up.
Well you see, that side of the sign hovers, its a half hover sign
Pretty good.
No complaints. I am intrigued, looking forward to the full-length. I would not be surprised if some people mark you down for the letters, but I am quite sure that I am correct in assuming that that is intentional styling.
Now I must wait, because apparently it hasn't been long enough since I last reviewed something. Is it wrong to have a high WPM?
It was all right...
...I liked the party hat idea, but this lacked the humor and depth that was its potential. Disappointing.
ill improve on it some more, and submit the new one when im done with it.
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Clocktopia
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